Blake, are you serious with your rating?
Did we both test the same model?
For a first-time model it is ok, but eaven the propeller is not round but somehow eliptic with many edges. That can't earn a rating of "Very good job"...
In my eyes it is ok for a first-timer, but there are many things to improve to become a good model...
I'm not a fan of overrating things because then people think what they have done is superb, outstanding etc. so they do no more effords to improve their skills.
You know? If everyone is telling you "hey, what your doing is absolutely great" while it in reality is more like crap, then you dont have the impulse to make it better...
Everyone (including myself) starts with small ugly 3Dmodels for FMS, but I think if you give helpfull critics and usefull tips that will improve the skills much more than giving the highest compliments...
So Danth, continue to improve your skill and knowledge about 3D modelling. Feel free to ask specific things (e.g. how to make a round wingtip, etc.) we will help you.
After some early basic models the good ones will follow automatically!
And remember: to make a good model you dont have to build an F-16 or so. It is more worth to make a small model (e.g. a Skybilrd) looking perfect, than creating a F-16 with average details...
